Sorry I posted these again. I had posted them on Wednesday and then I couldn't find them so I posted them again and then just found the ones I posted last week...if that makes any sense
These look good. Did you do the drawing on the Physics book yourself? It looks good, it just isn't consistent with the other two. The other two have a more old-school textbook drawing feel. Might want to look for a physics drawing like that.
caitlin, they look a lot better! there is a lot more balance throughout the composition of each book. the only thing i would suggest is to play a little more with the tracking between the letters in the title to make them a little more even. also, you might want to make the paragraph on the back with no rag. otherwise great job!
Good job, Caitlin. These look really good. My only suggestion and I could be totally off is to do something with the white space on the right hand side of the front cover.
I agree with Steph. They look good but I feel like the bottom right corner is blank in a bad way. I'm all for open space, but this seems a little weird.
I like these pieces. the line drawing feel works for them. I think they would be stronger if completely black and white. I don't feel the color blocks are necessary. they leave some awkward white space along the right side of the covers. cheers though. good work
I agree with the other comments on improving the consistency of the drawings and the balance of the composition on the cover. Also, you may not need the text labeling the diagrams.
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Sorry I posted these again. I had posted them on Wednesday and then I couldn't find them so I posted them again and then just found the ones I posted last week...if that makes any sense
These look good. Did you do the drawing on the Physics book yourself? It looks good, it just isn't consistent with the other two. The other two have a more old-school textbook drawing feel. Might want to look for a physics drawing like that.
caitlin, they look a lot better! there is a lot more balance throughout the composition of each book. the only thing i would suggest is to play a little more with the tracking between the letters in the title to make them a little more even. also, you might want to make the paragraph on the back with no rag. otherwise great job!
Good job, Caitlin. These look really good. My only suggestion and I could be totally off is to do something with the white space on the right hand side of the front cover.
I agree with Steph. They look good but I feel like the bottom right corner is blank in a bad way. I'm all for open space, but this seems a little weird.
I like these pieces. the line drawing feel works for them. I think they would be stronger if completely black and white. I don't feel the color blocks are necessary. they leave some awkward white space along the right side of the covers.
cheers though.
good work
I like these. But yes, the bottom right looks oddly blank. Also, it's hard to read 'Spark', of Spark Notes.
They turned out really good. They have a real bio. feel to them.
I agree with the other comments on improving the consistency of the drawings and the balance of the composition on the cover. Also, you may not need the text labeling the diagrams.
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